This is damn good, impressive even. I normally look for things I don't like in pictures that I do like (hence the name Picky), but this is just so well done. It's actually the first of this gallery I've seen (a friend likes Cheerilee and linked it).
I guess for starters, Cheerilee's cutie mark looks a bit big. I didn't notice until the frowns on the flowers drew my attention (which are amusing, btw). Whoa, and Sweetie Belle's horn looks a bit big, too. Length seems to depend on height (Celestia's is very long and she's tall), and Sweetie Belle's looks a bit wide for her head and longer than Twilight's.
The hay-looking floor is good, but the wall seems so barren. Assuming they're in a young school (and this picture follows the floor in the episodes), it's so pale with only two pictures. It only gives us Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle to look at, whose colors contrast the pale wall in this elementary school? The idea is funny, the picture is neat, and the style is awesome, but more can always be done. This is far from cluttered.
Gave me a really good laugh. Both of them are done nicely.
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"I’m gonna be like an apple tree, I’m gonna let all my branches run free. I’m gonna reach way up to the sun and, Open my arms for everyone" -lyrics "Apple Tree" by Justin Roberts
side note: First student of Princess Luna Crushing on Big Mac <3
I guess for starters, Cheerilee's cutie mark looks a bit big. I didn't notice until the frowns on the flowers drew my attention (which are amusing, btw). Whoa, and Sweetie Belle's horn looks a bit big, too. Length seems to depend on height (Celestia's is very long and she's tall), and Sweetie Belle's looks a bit wide for her head and longer than Twilight's.
The hay-looking floor is good, but the wall seems so barren. Assuming they're in a young school (and this picture follows the floor in the episodes), it's so pale with only two pictures. It only gives us Cheerilee and Sweetie Belle to look at, whose colors contrast the pale wall in this elementary school? The idea is funny, the picture is neat, and the style is awesome, but more can always be done. This is far from cluttered.
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