I was just going to write an awesome fangirling comment but when I realized you were accepting critique, I just had to do it.
The colors , EVERY color you used in this picture balance out perfectly. I love how the umbrella from her drink landed in her hair in the midst of the frisbee mishap XD Did I get that right?
And how Pinkie is just plum terrified.
This piece is nothing short of a humorous masterpiece! There's really nothing I can offer you as far as constructive critique, as the simple style in itself (with the clear amount of effort put into the linework alone) does this picture just enough justice, everything about it is just spot on.
I love how you outlined every thing to look like a cartoon, and the shadowing is cute, and modern. You have a great technique, and style. I love how you have Celestia do her mane. It looks so fashionable! Its like she's a teenager again. And Luna's face is so priceless. It looks like she's about to burst from laughter! Also, Pinkie Pie is hillarious! She seems to think that Celestia is going to send her to the moon! Lastly I would like to say I love all the small details you put in,like the spiled drink. It means alot in the art.
Actually,the object is a frizbee because you would have to bounce a ball to get the ball to move and you would see small crater marks in the sand. A frizbee is thrown and you wouldn't have any crater marks in the sand.
Celestia: .... Luna: Pfffff! Hehehehe Rainbow Dash: Uh...... *nervous laugh* Uh.... yeah. Ummm... I... Celestia: What are you waiting for? Rainbow Dash: Huh... I'm.... I'm..... soooooooo sorry... your highness.... I truly am.... Celestia: Not that. RD: Uh...ex-excuse me? C: I'm not going to move... not an hoof... until you finally remove that "thing" off my horn... if you dare to. RD: Uh.... *glancing at Luna* Luna: *shaking her head* RD: Uh... C: I was spending a lovely time here with my sister, taking some time reading this magazine and.... this happened. What do you have to say to your defense so I won't punish you for this? RD: Uh... *glancing at Pinkie behind the palm tree* It.... it was my fault... P-Pinkie just threw it in my direction and... I didn't catch it in time and.... I think it derived.... in your..... yeah.... C: So, you are telling me this is your fault? And not Pinkie Pie's over there? RD: Uh.... yeah? But I think she feel really... really bad.... and guilty about this.... Luna: Pffffffff! Hehehehehe C: Alright. RD: Huh? Luna: What? C: You may take your disk.... ONLY if Pinkie Pie retrieves it. And apologize herself. RD: But... I just did... for her... C: I'm waiting. RD: Uh.... PINKIE PIE!!! THE PRINCESS WANTS TO TALK TO YOU!!! Pinkie Pie shook her head. RD: COME ON, PINKIE PIE! IT'S THE PRINCESS! SHE WON'T EAT YOU!!! Pinkie Pie: NO! RD: Excuse me.... a moment.... I...I'll come back.. it won't be long... I promise... *flies to Pinkie and land in front of her* Pinkie, you have to apologize. Or we won't get our frisbee back... Pinkie Pie: But I have several others at home..... she can keep this one.... RD: Are you kidding me? You know very well what happened! You MUST apologize for this incident. It is the proper thing to do! You have no idea what she could do to you if you don't... and by the way she is reacting to all this.... I'm beginning to be scared myself... Pinkie Pie: O-kie.... dokie... *trots in the direction of Celestia who is watching her coming to her* RD: *trots by Pinkie's side* Both stopped in front of Celestia. C: Well? I'm listening. PP: I... I'm sorry your majesty... so sorry for this incident. C: I'm glad you to hear that from you. You shouldn't have left Rainbow Dash here apologize for you even as a gesture of friendship. You should have taken the responsibility of your action and came to me by yourself to apologize. PP: Y-ou're right... I'm sorry for that too your majesty. C: That's quite alright. I'm happy you learned your lesson. *uses her magic to remove the disk from her horn and hold it in front of Pinkie* I think... this is your? PP: *grabs the disk in her jaw* H-hank you you' highness. RD: Uh... are you going to punish.... us? Luna: *rolls eyes* C: I'll pass. For this time. *Rainbow and Pinkie both felt relieved* But... *RD and Pinkie hold their breath* only if you buy me a new glass of the same drink... and a new magazine... RD: Y-yes, of course. Right, Pinkie? PP: Obsholutely. RD: We'll be right back... *both left for the bar and the magazine stand* Luna: You were quite patient and indulgent, dear sister. I'm impressed. C: Oh! It was just an accident. After all those years, I learned to keep calm in those situations. Luna: I know I couldn't stay as calm as you. C: It is something you learn with time. And a LOT of practice.
Awesome piece. I really like how expressive is your artwork.
Uh, the ponies were completely out of character in this. Especially Celestia. If anything, she'd pretend to get angry and laugh it off with them afterward. Celestia wouldn't take an accident like that so seriously.