I think you captured the rain running down her hair perfectly the rain is perfectly balanced it's not to heavy and not to light. The darker colours go well with Fleur's brighter colours it really suits Fleur.I also love the expression on her face and the detail on her horn is fantastic,her cutie mark is clear. I love darker strokes in her mane and I noticed how some strands of mane are a bit lose it adds a nice effect to her mane and the ears have great detail too.This is an absolutely marvelous Piece of art: Yours Sincerly Zecorathegreat
Who else thinks Fleur is Celestia in disguise? Anyway, a beautiful effect on the rain on her coat, splashing on her horn, and magnificent shadow effects... But,sadly,I have an artist's eye, and I see the way the water reflects her... It looks odd, not like real water would, reflecting someone. Sure, it would look disoriented, and I know you probably weren't aiming for real-life effects, but I only see her colors on the water.. of course, it may be the way you positioned her and the portrait, or it may just be me, but anyway, this is magnificent.